Wednesday, December 10

It isn't overrated

It isn't overrated


Sometimes we are just
not doing it yet.
Confused, begin to call an
anthill a mountain.
no one is ever impressed with
conquering mountains
the size of anthills?
just as well as excitement dies
in cases of mistaken identity,
a common wrong made
popular by many.
While to those who have
reach the top and seen the view
it isn't overrated
You'll show with actions
and I'll use my words
while every now and then
just for the thrill to be able to
shake things up quite a bit
we'll trade spaces through
place and time.
and we both can agree
it isn't overrated.
my baby,
{joonam},
my heart,
{azizam},
my sweetie,
{kuchuluam},
my darling....
I want to call you...
I want to call you every name under the moon
just because...
I like to hear the way they roll off my tongue
and sing to you, therefore ....
it isn't overrated
I want to desire, to beg for a kiss
just one more upon my lips please...
{meboosamet}
just for the thrill of it, not
because I've been deprived by you
but I want to bring that rise in you.
it isn't overrated
I want to desire, to beg to sit on your lap
just so I can talk dirty in your ear....
{meekonamet}
just for the thrill of it, not
because I've been deprived by you
but I want to bring that rise in you.
it isn't overrated
I want to desire, to beg
just for the sake of begging....
{mikhamet}
just for the thrill of it, not
because I've been deprived by you
but I want to bring that rise in you.
it isn't overrated
we can buy tickets for two
and share a seat as we journey
on a ride to fill a lifetime
enjoying every
twist, curve, surprise,
just to confirm the truth of the wise....
hoping to do it right
for the good of it
for the bad of it
it isn't overrated





jfh-12.10.08 (4 my favorite...)

5 comments:

Mr. Smart Guy said...

Damn.
Whew.
Damn.
Words are powerful and you just struck a mighty blow...

NaturallyAlise said...

grrrrrrl, you are awesome, that was simply beatiful... I particularly liked the line: "I want to call you every name under the moon
just because...
I like to hear the way they roll off my tongue"
I really love your writing style!

brwn_eyes_brwngirl said...

Thanks George...um I was feeling it this morning on my way to work...I mean you can't let those past

Natually - glad you can stop by...I don't know I mean it was the moment..

Ms.Honey said...

Let me find out you writing a book :)

Chanel said...

*snaps* Okay now this rite here....i'm feelin it. Love the flow of the rhythm. And your descriptions...Yes. This is it. Swing by my poetry blog and check out some of my pieces when u get a chance.